Slinky

Slinky can stretch out

You can get them at Wal-Mart

Slinkys are fun toys

 

 

I love Granny Smith

Granny Smiths are so, so  good

Apples are bright red

Boring:   The lady bug ate the leaf.

Elaborated:  The red and black polka-dotted ladybug courageously tasted the green leaf.

 

Boring: The girl turned in her voting ballot.

My new sentence: The intelligent girl quickly turned in her voting ballot.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Boring the ladybug ate the leaves

Good The red and black small ladybug cautiously tast the green leaves

Boring the girl tn